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"Staring" you call it,
it's "rude", you say.
"Oberservant" it is,
just attention I pay.

Then you confront me:
"Got a problem, dweep?"
And call me retarded
for the silence I keep.

Watching you closely
leaving after a dwell.
I totally missed
hearing the bell.

All of a sudden
you disappear,
behind a large crowd
and I tremble with fear.

So much noise,
I cannot think straight.
Trying to escape,
I tempt the fate.

They're all passing by,
some pushing my back.
What I currently need
is to calm down for a sec.

So I kneel down
screening ears and head,
humming constantly
to block out the threat.

They're rushing towards me,
offering help,
which makes it worse,
as I start to yelp.

I'm getting louder
as more people come near,
I can't tell them apart,
'cause my vision's not clear.

"Asperger" you call it,
it's a "dysfunction" you say.
"Thinking different" it is,
but what price do I pay?
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Just a "random" poem I wrote for English class.
We're reading the book "The Curious Incident of the Dog at Night-time" at the moment, which is about a kid with this syndrome.
So, what's the first thing we do? Write a poem, of course. Well, I kind of like it.
Please tell me about any spelling/grammer mistakes (except for artistic freedom). And these categories, damn it. D:

-WereSheep
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~FrostInk Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ich weiß zwar immer noch nicht so genau was Asperger ist (UUUNGEBIILDET~), aber mir gefällt das Gedicht. Kriegst sicher ne gute Note für, falls du es denn vorträgst. xD Und es gefällt mir iwie, dass es mich so an den Film Ben X erinnert. Weil der war toll. <3 Weißt du ja. ;v;
Macht mich aber auch ein bisschen traurig, weil es ja immer Leute gibt die tatsächlich scheiße behandelt werden wegen sowas. v.v Na ja... jedenfalls gut gemacht. XD
Weiter so. :turbopoke:
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~WhiteWereSheep Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, no, you didn't. Just :turbopoke:'d me back. :/
Nein, Scherz. xD
Danke, und ja der Film war toll... Zufall, dass wir das jetzt gerade in Englisch machen. o,o
-hust-Und Asperger ist eine Form von Autismus. xD-hust-
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~FrostInk Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ja, das weiß ich auch. Aber mehr weiß ich halt auch nich. Ich hab zwar den Film gesehen aber so ganz will's irgendwie nicht in meinen Kopf.

...Makes sense. :icondawhatplz:
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